Walking and talking is what the woman in front of me did. She had a lisp from her tounge ring but that didn't stop her.She was wearing a long black coat and suede shoes.She didn't look like she was crazy but she was. She talked to everyone that that walked past her and asked them random questions. This woman had vibrant red hair that was cut to a bob, and very greasy. She hadn't showered in days. She wasn't homeless she was just freindly. Or weird. She socialized with complete strangers. She needed some one to talk to.
She was very polite when people kept walked away and didn't talk to her. As if she were use to it. Thirty five to forty years old is what she looked like. wrinkles forming but not many appearing. She asked one man if her knew that god loved him. the man replied everyone loves me. She replied excet me. He continued to walk and so did she. She didn't care what others thought about her she just walked and talked.
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It's a good description.
What made her this way? Where does she live? Why would she respond to the man the way she it; or even ask him the question to begin with?
Incorporating the answers to these questions will make it more than a description.
Okay... will do!
I agree with Mz. C. because your lacking a real story behind the description. What you do have however, is really good and you should keep.
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